Comparing Outlines

In analyzing my outline along side the model article outline I had an "Aha" moment. One could even say it was a "Duh" moment, but that would be negative and counter-productive. My model article moves its article along by using headings that engage a micro structure of description. We sequentially move along as he describes a natural procedure for implementing Bakhtianian views of language in the classroom for more active student learning and engagement. This is what I want for my article, but I have been stuck in the micro-structure using problem-solution and causation. I want to move to description to tell the story.